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Hours To The Grave
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Hours To The Grave |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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 Hours To The Grave rising above the steel grey mist surrounding the monuments of those come and gone ... and here in the gravest of moments where beginnings always end and shadows have time to play with those come and gone ... and here but only for just today for time does stand still in hours to the grave "In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living." If it wasn't right, wasn't real ... then why did it make us feel ....? [This message has been edited by ctowen (07-01-2005 07:15 AM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really enjoyed this, but can't see the pic....  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
thank you sea ... not sure why the pic didn't take ... I did the same as the other .... hmmmm? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good write...could visualize. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
sorry everyone ... just doesn't show .... tried it with different tags ... not sure why? It was a pic of a city in the early morning fog, sktscrapers looking like gravestones .... it fit well. Hope I can figure out why. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig, I like the poem, and I bet the pic went well. That is just the problem I had with pics on here. Just couldn't make it happen. Nicely written, anyway. Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... try ... try ... and try again ... lol!!! Sandra, ty for your inluminating smile and presence!!! ..... I will just have to try another until I get it right ... haha |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this one, again... grave2.jpeg..it should not be jpeg, it should be jpg download photos that have the jpg format, not jpeg |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
when you upload a photo into photobucket, it says: "Valid file types: jpg, gif, png, bmp, swf" JPEG is not listed here...not a valid file... you'll get it..I have faith  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Your words are explicit enough not to need a picture. Good writing! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
in the gravest of moments where beginnings always end and shadows have time to play with those come and gone ... poignant, enjoyed this and would like to see that pic some time....Happy 4th |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
ty ladies all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful pic and poem here but the picture is huge! just a friendly tip: in photobucket you can click "edit" and and reduce the size of the picture. I used to use the "75% of original" reduction. A picture as big as this could use the "50% of original" reduction...if the picture is not as big as this, then the 75% should do |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the picture really adds to this...I'm glad Dixie could help you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the picture goes perfectly with the write, Craig, and the combo is powerful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
OMG, I'm so glad I came back, and so happy you were able to load this picture, can thoroughly see what provoked your words...picture is simply awesome! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the picture is finE....and goes so well with these words....your inspiration is showing! wonderful....hugsss you   ME~ I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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