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Open Poetry #35

What Happens To Feelings

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-06-30 07:06 AM

What Happens To Feelings

I thought about writing today
Still I hesitated once more
Questions I needed to ask
But I guess they will ignore

What was silence telling me
As the weeks pass on by
I guess people do change
Without giving reasons why

I had many happy memories
Of shared communication
If people move on with life
Was silence their indication

Only they could fill the space
That I have had for so long
When they remained silent
I knew something was wrong

Much was written in the past
We communicated before
What happens to feelings
Do they not count anymore

Hope©2005
with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/91/poem_753266.html

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-06-30 08:18 AM

This was articulated so well...enjoyed the rhyme to this...yet, so so true...so true...hugs to you and thanks so much for writing and sharing.

sometimes people become so busy and wrapped up in their own lives, they don't have time for anything else, sad as it seems, it's true...and we miss them...all we can do, is create a busy life of our own, do things we've always wanted to do, but never got to...visit places...go to dinner by ourselves with a great book...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-06-30 10:19 AM

"What was silence telling me
As the weeks pass on by
I guess people do change
Without giving reasons why"

you have no clue how close to home you have come with this.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2005-07-03 11:42 AM

This was very good and well crafted! You have a way with words.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-07-03 09:40 PM

tis a sad thing

but makes for good poetry

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