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Juju
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0 posted 2005-06-15 12:30 PM


Men cant fly

I still hear the echo of airplanes
They fly far above our reach
One can only cover their ears
-Men cant fly-

A sense of fear or humility
Comes from knowing there are bigger things
Which we can’t hide from
-They always find us-

Sometimes the thought of losing control
Or even worse to know we never had it
Can trespass the thin line of insanity
-Who are we really?-


-Juju

I have internet access again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ericc
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1 posted 2005-06-15 12:55 PM


Great write!

Eric

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2 posted 2005-06-15 12:59 PM


JuJu~

Oh ... I just adore this thought -

'Sometimes the thought of losing control
Or even worse to know we never had it
Can trespass the thin line of insanity'


Oh yes ... this thin line, I have known~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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Margherita
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3 posted 2005-06-15 01:23 PM


We are earthbound in body, thanks to God we can fly high in spirit!

Very good thoughts, well rendered.

Love, Margherita

welcome back!

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-06-15 01:50 PM


very enjoyable read...thank you
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-06-16 12:17 PM


Enjoyed...James
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6 posted 2005-06-16 10:26 AM


Juju, I'm glad you got access again
it's good to read you again too  

keep on writing!

Juju
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7 posted 2005-06-16 09:39 PM


I am glad you enjoyed this poem.


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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8 posted 2005-06-17 10:51 AM



bernie

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9 posted 2005-06-17 03:52 PM


I know how not having access can feel...you sure came back with a bang...Wonderful poem...*big hugs*

iliana
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10 posted 2005-06-17 04:22 PM


Very profound, Juju.....quite liked this one!   ....jo
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11 posted 2005-06-17 06:33 PM


very impressed, excellent work here
Juju
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12 posted 2005-06-18 11:15 AM


well I am glad you like this poem.
-juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2005-08-09 08:39 AM


great  poem...enjoyed
*s
Maureen

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14 posted 2005-08-09 04:35 PM


I am woman...watch me fly?
LOL, a good challenge write. Thanks for getting this idea off the ground.

Juju
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15 posted 2005-09-07 10:54 PM


I am glad you enjoyed my work.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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