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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Stop stop, just stop holding your love over my head promising that your love has a possibility to be mine did you think I would die inside yes it breaks my heart things have hurt me past pride and this can be such a paradise standing on the edge of hell a current of pure electricity the movement in emotions clinging flowing to you cellophaned to static that runs the very length of me how difficult do you think it is to pour myself out so exposed pretending just standing in your judgments things all pretty on the outside yet, all so empty on the in this is the simple truth I do feel too much but you have underestimated me and I don’t deserve any of this playing on my emotions clouding my better judgment and maybe I am more woman than you bargained for just some words cut out |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
how difficult do you think it is to pour myself out so exposed pretending just standing in your judgments things all pretty on the outside yet, all so empty on the in this is the simple truth I do feel too much but you have underestimated me and I don’t deserve any of this playing on my emotions ---------------------------------- Helen, it is so very sad that people play on others emotions, and how we feel when we are being underestimated. I understand this one all to well gal... Hugs to you. Very nicely penned H.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*hand in yours* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
did you think I would die inside yes it breaks my heart things have hurt me past pride Not my kind of paradise, but I hear you Helen. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
now think about this stopping in the name of love can cause big problems Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
 Which is harder to start or stop? Very nice piece. |
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