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Angel1 Junior Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 20TN, USA |
You strike and score again and again You're the best, The Greatest, One of a kind You tackle your opponents like a bowling ball to pins They fall like a hunter's prey While you continue to race away like Dale Jr. at Daytona You shoot again, but miss and fall to the ground, as if you'd been shot You wonder if you'll ever be that good again You persevere and try again like a writer does writer's block Will you win? Will you succeed? I did! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yeah!  enjoyed this  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling at this enthusiastic will to succeed, no matter the obstacle |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed , just had to read this one ,I watched my sons play for many years and my husband coaches Hope |
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Angel1 Junior Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 20TN, USA |
thanks. Hmm, I need to dig my other poems out. |
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