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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Today is filled with promise, even though the heat can weaken the spirit and love has taken a vacation. Because in this silence the pen is mightier than the sword and my storytelling paints an "unforgettable portrait" of feelings for what once was or could have been. A distraction in life, that's what it was, one that threw me off the path of realness kissing me into a falsehood, losing myself in a "tapestry of unquilted love"... Addictions of the heart, wanting to love and be loved, opening up to rainbows of the mind where heaven touched a bit of this earth, always on the other side of midnight. Words, vampire-like, or maybe witchcraft in disguise, where serenity was a falsehood and the blank page ahead of me was filled with my fantasies of belonging. A feeling needed to make it through the days when emptiness took a strong hold and losses left a gaping hole that anyone could have filled. I was a victim of heart, torturing myself into becoming but not without reason, and now I see what blinded me before and I know I am going to be ok because it has happened... once again I have fallen in love . . . . with life itself and the beauty of its touch. And no one, NO ONE can ever take that away from me... again. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-29-2005 07:14 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
no they cant gal... no they cant. brava for you hon, smiling big here at you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
its whatcha own gal, it's yours and part of who you are...never compromise your identity...ever... Hugs to you...and yours... a very plesant read  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
There is that determination I remember .... .... still smiling here!! *S |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Words, vampire-like, or maybe witchcraft in disguise, where serenity was a falsehood" Well now, if I were paranoid...   I applaud the strength in this, m. *chuckling* and I swear if I still lived in here, I would wonder...shaking me head. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and you are ever the gracious lady  Thanks mo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you all...just getting over feelings of lacking warmth and self worth...realizing that today is a new day and my tomorrows will be even better hugs to you Karen...love you M |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
wow this was great stuff |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 *laughing* love you too lady and how could anyone in their right mind, not?  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen "And no one, NO ONE can ever take that away from me... again." Strong words....I really like hearing!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
MAureen, I love this. I feel it. We have so many strong emotions, I wonder why they all feel so hard to handle. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynterBliss~ 'the other side of midnight' Oh my ... liking that sooooo much ... I'm gonna have to slather it in future ink-of-think~ You're such a versatile poetess ... a *gift* that you so readily share with us all~ Have a beautiful 4th Celebration~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...Enjoyed very much...Paul Tis beautiful when the heart opens up to reality All darkness turns to light and you realize this is who I am and no one can hurt me ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Words, vampire-like, or maybe witchcraft in disguise, where serenity was a falsehood and the blank page ahead of me was filled with my fantasies of belonging." Excellent poetic expression....IMO A poem well done, in which your feelings are clearly explained, Maureen... enjoyed... -----------ice ><> |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I'm happy for you, my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I was a victim of heart, torturing myself into becoming but not without reason, and now I see what blinded me before and I know I am going to be ok because it has happened... once again I have fallen in love . . . . with life itself and the beauty of its touch. And no one, NO ONE can ever take that away from me... again." EXCELLENT !! Positive, determined write Maureen. Love this!!!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
can I say, take a bow? LOL, guess so, if you're reading all the other replies BRAVO! Take a bow! an excellent write! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
once again I have fallen in love . . . . with life itself and the beauty of its touch. And no one, NO ONE can ever take that away from me... again. yer absolutely right, it's all yers baby :hugs M mxx drove me like a magnet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh M, this was so wonderful! Isn't it great to finally awaken and find there can be new beginnings? or even better beginnings? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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