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Open Poetry #35

Beyond the limits

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2005-06-29 02:34 AM

Beyond the limits of a mind
a mystic one with love abides
and at a whim moves you and me
betwixt, between, true ecstasy.

From there to here; what do I fear
robed and anointed with my tears
restrained on this unstable ground
in spirals spinning down, down, down?

And life’s unending turn from love;
who stands behind this daily shove
that lands you/me distant, apart,
from an immense and fulsome heart?

Beyond the limits I declare
a merchant gathers up my prayers
like winter hoards for warmer days
sun’s truly awesome summer rays.

And there they lie in endless sleep
beyond the limits of my keep!

Helen / 29 June 2005

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-06-29 06:59 AM

love the whole thing, Helen...but have to agree with the last line that so much is :
"beyond the limits of my keep!"

M

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2005-06-29 10:26 AM

I love the word crafting in this poem! This is one of your best I thing!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2005-06-29 10:02 PM

You're a beautiful soul, Helen, and deserve the love you seek.

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