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I Am Not Her
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I Am Not Her |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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"I am not her, never could be and never would be". This I thought to myself now knowing the reasons, the whys and the answers... of the silence. No longer are the feelings there to sustain, this another year gone by another missing of more than "enough". Tired of the trying where "matters not" becomes the norm. And when this night passes to day and the day moves on to the night, the end will have arrived... for I could never be her. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are writing me today  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I think being yourself is enough, you do it well to the delight of many. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... and why would y'wanna be? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Little Mo darling heart now this is wonderful, and I know exactly how you feel, because I've definitely been to that dark place. Love this one darling one, you are as always exceptionally good at writing the truth. I'm so glad I posted here again, for I wouldn't have missed this for the world. as always Mushy xx xx xx Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
been there many of times myself *my heart feels this Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Feelings well expressed and completely understood, Maureen, .....took me 4 yrs in a relationship when I was young to come to that same conclusion.  .....jo |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
beautiful write m'lady I so connect with this one, in many different ways and for as many different reasons Great stuff here |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
this was great and you know i understand bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you all...I appreciate the kindness of your responses M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Tired of the trying where "matters not" becomes the norm. I understand this all too well... but... you're a special person just as you are. Big hugs for writing this feeling of failure so well. *S* |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I hear echoes of deep sighs ... and agreements of just being you. no one can do you better ... *S |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you are a real heartbeat, yanno? loved this write |
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