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marcel
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0 posted 2005-06-29 01:24 AM



Beauty Captured in Her Smile

Beauty is captured in your smile
As memories remain eternal to the sun;
Through your scintillating eyes I see perfection,
Matching sparkle for sparkle, the stars entice.
There is no truer gift endowed by Heaven’s kiss,
Then fortunes untold and retold to infinite bliss
The beauty captured in your smile.

I need this moment to breathe in forever
Smelling the strands of moonlight woven into her hair;
Not so long ago fairytales once told
Of a heart that purified all it embraced---
Now the legends can be re-written
Of the beauty that was captured in a smile.

Spoken from the hearts of the most romantic,
Are the whispers of flowers and gentle things;
These whispers are carried silently,
Within the ears of golden doves,
Before dropping slowly from the clouds alcoves,
Kissing my face as I peer skyward,
Hypnotizing my sighing soul….
Sweetness should be her name,
Because her love is all I need into eternity---
Her beauty captured in my smile.


Marcel

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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-06-29 01:47 AM


marcel,
Well I'm sure she'll love it a lot. Nicely done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-06-29 09:10 PM


Marcel~
Throughout the day, I've read this several times ... each time touched by the gentleness of your thoughts~
I'm sure she is too~



There is much beauty here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2005-06-30 08:56 AM


So very happy for you Keith.
Hugs,
TD

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2005-06-30 09:20 AM


this was absolute and pure beauty...thank you for sharing
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
5 posted 2005-06-30 10:05 AM


Very sweet.  You both are very lucky.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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