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how you move with the moon
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how you move with the moon |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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from this port, i love you far-away and i do not have you the horizon harbours you with the earth and the sky with the murmur of fish still, your waves sing to me they clothe me with your wet garments O legendary creature how you move with the moon out of reach far-away from this port drove me like a magnet |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
However.... never out of mind....  this is, so I shall.... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Beautiful.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this is like listening to a very special whisper that you have allowed us to hear. This is soooo beautiful Bella. and Kari, is sooo right. it is thus dubbed....I really want to care, |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Enjoyed. Haunting. SG |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i know just how you feel but could never say it with as much style and pure heart as you do angel .... when can we have coffee ?? lol or tea ... this poem rules the world much love - jw |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kari, indeed never out of mind  Thank youCloud9, thank you for the beautiful  Gentle one?, more than a whisper, i'm glad you thought it beautiful, thank you Bella. SimplyGold, thank you Jussy? Thank you so much for your lovely reply.. Coffee? Tea? umm either.. just say when..yer place or mine heh  drove me like a magnet |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bella? It does not matter if you whisper, yell, scream rant and rave... you write it... I will listen...   I really want to care, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
if you write it, it will come...hehe this was like a visit to a very spiritual place...lovely |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I happen to live in a port city too. Coincidence?I think not.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful writing..love the picture too... *s M |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so beautiful... "and i do not have you the horizon harbours you with the earth and the sky with the murmur of fish still, your waves sing to me" totally love that... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So lovely, and expressive...conveys such a longing. ....jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ How very, very lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Soothingly romantic play on words. Loved it. John |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree love and longing so often go together, they sure do in this beautiful poem. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Bella, yer wonderful. thank you. LeeJ, thank you for the lovely M'lady *smile* Maureen, thank you so much Ahh SEA, your name alone makes me sigh.. thank you glad you loved it. iliana, thank you so much Marge, glad you enjoyed, thank you. John, glad you found it soothing Martie, thank you dear friend for you always kind words and support. drove me like a magnet |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
port cities are the best. the hustle and the smells. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Out of reach, yet so beautiful.. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~and as I read, I swam~ within my memories the cries of an arctic Orca, the sight of playful frolicking Pacific dolphins between the Rincon and the Channel Islands, the grey whales migrating...the feel of sand slipping betweeen my toes guess you could say, I liked this, how it made me move within memory tides |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
these words are soothing...the waves are like a lullaby If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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