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Accidental Bliss |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Collecting green places pure in a venue of oceanic waters urban tapestries walking forth unified in fusing colors he rested his glasses so i could see his eyes, metaphorically “we’re still singing!”, my heart poured out an exercise, a backward poem learns by heart, perhaps perhaps… an overstatement of love who ever meets capable feelings? making leisurely life, obtainable, possible spring allows the moonlight thru doesn’t it? petals watch, carrying a sunset where a village mushrooms and i, i, climb with the moon only, equal to a maple leaf mulching imagery, sealing connection manners of mind’s intensity views great swans stepping out of my body transcending, toward a beautiful part of nature jasmine is ours anxious radiant approaching wearing the scent of those long days beside… shadows of mid day tunes of which only you… only you could speak i dreamed your mind in a school of every fluttered pulse your voice became my ears light rolled into my nostrils resting on a now clear morning mixing the senses of dreams of hope of reality…mine... but it wasn't yours sparkling like wet dewed roses the first one, you gave me and the glow you left behind like your tears tied to my heart feeling your desires your heartbreaks your fears it wasn’t you who delivered scar tissue it was the ways of an unexpected world now, standing on a cold mountain…alone…. looking down at the few gold pieces in my palm drifting me towards a birth… you left behind, a hope chest of weaknesses turned to earth i could never understand the thing until now collecting those green places of everything inside gathering flocks of doves and the last mistaken good... undressing me... and perhaps from that I will love more wiser more purer more... [This message has been edited by LeeJ (06-29-2005 07:10 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I would say you had a good nights sleep and woke up to the full meaninng of the day. Enjoyed and the top of the morning to you. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I feel we share many collective venues .... your words do sing!! ... and I have learned to love more wiser. extremely felt!!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
an exercise, a backward poem learns by heart, perhaps perhaps… an overstatement of love ~*~ This poem likes me, but those lines kept me! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
undressing me ...... it was like the heart and soul was bared here Hope |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OMG Lee!..THIS is SO beautiful! Too many excellent lines that captured me to quote you here. Wonderful wonderful write m'friend. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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