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TWENTY OR LESS...#202
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#202 Copyright 2005 by: Mark V Sheldon Sunburned dreams on wrinkled skin a gulf of days fading to a sea of nights You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice imagery here well done good to see you back |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Caramel color to soothe in warmth touches that bring me to life keeping me young M |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really liked this one  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 ridin those waves until the sun sets |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yup, that happens from too much sun. That and heatstroke.  95 in the shade here today. Puts some colour in your cheeks though.  Excellent one Mark. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Love the imagery. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 ......jo |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hi Dixie: Thanks for the supportive words. Hey Maureen: I prefer your outlook... Thank you, SEA... Kacy... that sounds like fun... Good morning, Nancy... hope today is cooler for you... Glad you enjoyed, Sweetpoetess... Thanks Jo... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
An ageless heart beats smoothly while fantasy dreams are brought to life filling visions sweetly The outside appearance is not what is important...the inner soul is where the true person resides...and your inner soul will always be youthful in my eyes....*big hugs* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Great images created by a few words. Well done Mark. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'a sea of nights' ---wow. What an image that brings to mind. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
endless happiness.... Bravo, you are always and will forever be a generous treat to your readers....marvelous |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Startime55, that was a very sweet response -- thank you -- and looks like you got the knack for TOL very well yourself... Very nice. Thanks again, Scorpio. Minimalism seems to have its own rewards... Pilgrimage: Imagine being lost in such a sea... (just a thought...) Gosh, LeeJ... that's a very humbling remark... I thank you for thinking so, but I am simply happy in just expressing the moment and sharing it with anyone who may find something within it with which to resonate... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: |
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