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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-06-28 07:27 AM


Extension

Each line of rhyme has extension
Circling out in its mention
Extending into time herself
That is the nature of itself

We live a part of natures strange
Forever is her source and range
We do not comprehend its flow
And never will we ever know

I write within my pen of dreams
And decorate that life in seems
It is the rainbow of my choice
Extensions of my soul and voice

A force that lives in all of us
Adding neither minus or plus
But a constant of the rhyme
Of an ever changing time

It’s my privilege to live and do
This human form I be with you


© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2005-06-28 07:47 AM


Sy darling man there is no greater member than you, this is truly exceptional writing, and top of the morning to you darling man. Although of course its not morning here its afternoon, lunchtime in fact, and I've just had a cup of coffee. Now don't nag me about my not eating, I'm eating lightly at the moment, this bug is still holding on and I don't want to take to my bed.

Really excellent writing, xx YOU are as always a perfect poet.
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
xx xx xx

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-06-28 07:49 AM


reading you is like sitting comfortably down with your words and listening to a soothing story...

Morning Sy

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-06-28 08:23 AM



I do believe you've penned
one for the library...
under lights!





Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

scorpio
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4 posted 2005-06-28 08:42 AM


I enjoy reading the extensions of your soul and voice Sy.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-06-28 09:14 AM


"I write within my pen of dreams
And decorate that life in seems
It is the rainbow of my choice
Extensions of my soul and voice"

Morning Sy m'friend!
Well this rendering of thoughts just made my day!
You do have a wonderful soul and voice.
Have a great day...
Smiles & Hugs, Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-06-28 10:45 AM


Good morning, Sir Sonneteer!

Your pen is a veritable extension of your creative soul!

Each morning you gift your readers with a piece of precious you!


EA
Flowers

Cloud 9
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7 posted 2005-06-28 11:04 AM


Echoing LeeJ

Very nice.


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-06-28 12:05 PM


Marsha
Thank you Mushy

LeeJ
That's good with me morning glorie

Sunshine
Perhaps, perhaps.

scorpio
Thank you for the well done.

Nancy


Earth Angel
You are a dear.

Cloud 9
I like your echo.

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2005-06-28 01:43 PM


Seymour~
You add so much beauty to my day~
Thank you kind poet~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-06-28 02:49 PM


Marge,
Thank you sweety.

serenity blaze
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11 posted 2005-06-28 06:47 PM


human form?

*shaking my head*

I don't believe it.

You are decidedly an angel.

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-06-28 09:00 PM


serenity  
No, Just climbed up a tall tree and flapped my arms.   

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