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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-06-27 01:56 PM

We danced to the music
of fallen leaves     crackling
underneath

uncertain feet

and the sound of love
was oh,     so sweet....

Hidden there
from all watchful eyes
two shadows blending
in tones of earth,

   and only the sky
could see us
swaying in time
with the trees

heartbeat music
   floated on the breeze....

Seasons come
and seasons go
and also,     love
although sometimes
we never know;
the reason, the how
the answer....
    and why....

        oh why,

but my heart will be
forever dancing
where time stands still
amidst the memories
of autumn skies...

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-06-27 02:01 PM

This was so pretty, especially

Seasons come
and seasons go
and also, love
although sometimes
we never know;
the reason, the how
the answer....
and why....

while reading, and I don't know why, I first read, seasons come and reasons go....

but the answers, somehow we'll never know all of them, if any....

Hugs lady, for a very precious write

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

2 posted 2005-06-27 02:26 PM

sigh...no we never know, and rarely are even given a bit of insight as to love's traipsings...but with time and pain, and wisdome comes a sort of acceptance and that is what I read in this.........along with an abundance of talent

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2005-06-27 02:36 PM

but my heart will be
forever dancing
where time stands still
amidst the memories
of autumn skies...

What a gentle memory where time stands still while it is again brought to living life...I lost myself in this beautiful poem...*big hugs*

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-06-27 03:15 PM

*sobs*

this touches my heart so completely...

sooo keeping this

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-06-27 03:39 PM

GentleLittleSpirit~

'only the sky
could see us
swaying in time
with the trees'

I have such a moment that commands time to halt~

This is beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-06-27 03:40 PM

Your muse is being VERY good to you, little one...

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2005-06-27 03:55 PM

You paint such a pretty scene, and then my heart hurts. Ture poetry in this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-06-27 06:37 PM

Oh this is simply beautiful m'gentle one, smiling wide.

mxx

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2005-06-28 07:36 AM

thank you all so very much for your kindness and support. Hugs and peace.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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