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Nightshade
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0 posted 2005-06-27 12:09 PM



Linger
stay close to me
let me feel your presence
with musky, cologne kisses ~ there
your voice a whispered secret always ~ here
remain my constant inner thought
sweet love, do not depart
beg ~ time stand still
Linger

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Chris Barker
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miss you all so much! it's camping season so I have been taking advantage of the fine weather. be well & many summertime hugs!

© Copyright 2005 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-06-27 12:52 PM


Much enjoyed, Chris!  So good to read you again (I've been away too long)!   ....jo
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"remain my constant inner thought
sweet love, do not depart
beg ~ time stand still
Linger"


*sighs*

this is so pretty!!

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3 posted 2005-06-27 02:07 AM


Very, Very pretty and I too agree. You sound to me (like the rest do here) to be a deep thinker. Escaping in thought has always been very natural to me most of my life. Not to hide but a place to find "peace of mind" from everyday living.
God Bless!

Tndeer1

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4 posted 2005-06-27 08:34 AM


this is so pretty

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-06-27 08:36 AM


Good one Chris...soft and gentle.
Hope you're enjoying your summer!!
~Hugs, Love and Miss ya, Teed~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2005-06-27 09:17 AM


Hi, Chris!

I haven't read a rictameter for some time. ~ and this one was lovely! ~ Sweet, soft, and romantically tender.

May such moments linger forever!


Linda

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7 posted 2005-06-27 09:28 AM


Thankyou my friends.
Summertime Hugs!!

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8 posted 2005-06-27 06:55 PM


Nice...James
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9 posted 2005-06-27 06:57 PM


THIS felt like a hug...
stay cool, bug free...eat well,
and swim lots for me!

Love, Sis

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10 posted 2005-06-27 11:14 PM


So so pretty.
Nice to read you again Chris.
TD

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11 posted 2005-06-28 01:17 AM


WOW

This spoke volumes m'friend

Have fun camping... they say its a blast, but I have never been privy to no bathroom or locks on doors lol

My heart houses many dark and dangerous moments...
~ME~

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12 posted 2005-06-28 11:46 AM


ahhhh camping.....hopefuly will get to do some of that myself this weekend hon.  
This is beautiful and I am so pleased to see you breeze by on the summer winds hon.....
come back soon now ya hear!

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13 posted 2005-06-28 01:40 PM


Chris~
A perfectly BEAUTIFUL Rictameter !!!


I love this form ... and this is just perfect~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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