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maximillian
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since 2003-09-13
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0 posted 2005-06-26 10:33 AM


Trying to impress slipping on a suit,
Confessing my attraction to her in two minds,
Staying on my two feet is hard enough I find,
The blip is the confession of the third and fourth mind.
From a deep standpoint, split personality could be judged,
An answer too simple for the society within my mind
Like a minefield of war heroes and female nurses,
None of which have identities the same as mine,
So I find it's my duty to impress, but with no one looking
I must confess, it's either my personality or my dress,
So I turn to the right, because the left must be wrong,
I fancy that woman you know, that one who did the song,
She fancies a rocker, maybe that's what wrong,
Time for me then to put on my dress,
100% cotton,
Concealed in a sheave of identities, all of then mine,
When I still don't get the girl I desire to return to my own mind,
But which one of them is fine?
Gee, I lost track of time, I've got a haircut at five.


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Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2005-06-26 05:20 PM


We find right and wrong in both left and right.

Enjoyed

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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