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Nary A Laugh
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nary A Laugh I saw my girl in the mall with another man, she was laughing and kissing him, and they were holding hands. Now I know that we were not a match, she was never that happy with me, rarely a smile, nary a laugh. JamesLee June23 2005 Did you believe this was true. Come on, you can tell me. Just thoughts after watching couples walking in the mall. Some seem so happy together and some sad. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Well, I beleive that it CAN be true. I have seen several "happily married" couples that weren't with the right couple if ya know what I mean lol And, personally... I have always said that you could learn more by just watching as opposed to saying anything. Some people have the saddest eyes, and you wonder what that person must have gone through in their life to make them so sad... Then, there are those that laugh and giggle like freaks all the time and you wanna pinch their head off hehe, cause NO ONES life can be that perfect. Then again.. life is what you make it, and there are some people that are just happy no matter what - people like that make me nervous  Great write James - you made me think, and that is what I love about poetry )))hugs((( Tima |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I don't think a woman with a man as romantic as you, could be so stupid I know what you mean about watching people, I like to do that... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang...this aches in me |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I understand what you are saying. I wrote one like this too. I like this! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Good observations. Enjoyed! SG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nope! I can honestly say that I thought it must have been a bad dream! lol  Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Nice write! Eric |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
But perhaps its not the smiles or the tears or kisses, but the moments of silence. I think Losing some one is not so much pain as regret. But always I remember those moments were I didn't have to be me or anything but silient. Those moments are so precious, those peaceful moments. I just moved on from the guy I fell head over heals for before I got sick. I thought he was woderful, but I could never write poetry about him, about moments he touched my hand or smiled. And I could never remember his face or his eyes.... Which is why I refused to kiss him after a month of flirting and blushes. I looked in to his eyes and still i did not know the color of his eyes. I guess it is because I could never have that moment of peace with him with out noticing those detials about him. Sounds horrible, but I don't think it would of never of worked. I think I am over him, in fact I saw him the other day. On a date. HE saw me studying and uncomfortably took his date the other direction. This made me smile or kinda laugh, because he never could consintrate on the person he was with, but every thing else. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
yea i see couples in the mall and i envy them at times. sigh Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love to people watch... and I just knew this couldn't be about you!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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