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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2005-06-25 11:24 PM



visions of
The Virgin Mary
whisper
inbetween
the frequencies
of unspoken dreams

there was a time
where
I
didn't want to
believe

your

faith
neatly strung
together
like a rosary

static never
clung to
your wings

prophet of hope

there was...
a time
where
I
didn't want to believe
in
myself

static never clung
to your
neatly strung friendship

bless
you
and your
little wings

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2005 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-06-25 11:59 PM


smiling here
a beauty of a write

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-06-26 02:39 AM


what a beautiful tribute
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with you
3 posted 2005-06-26 03:08 AM


I love this!
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4 posted 2005-06-26 03:19 AM


"there was...
a time
where
I
didn't want to believe
in
myself"

I am so pleased that those times are passing for you, Kristen.

~ and I'm sure you'd agree, her wings aren't so little!

Big hugs to you both,


Linda



littlewing
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5 posted 2005-06-27 09:19 AM


OMG!  I have not heard from you in eons and look what beautiful words you leave for me!  Thank you Kris, I am humbled.  And YOU, my fraggle, have a widening wingspan yourself!

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6 posted 2005-06-27 09:34 AM


Oh, how lovely!
Much enjoyed.

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Juju
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7 posted 2005-06-27 10:56 AM


What a delicate poem.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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8 posted 2005-06-27 11:28 AM



A treasure!

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9 posted 2005-06-27 11:43 AM


a beautiful gift for Suzie to treasure.  Nicely done....
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10 posted 2005-06-27 03:42 PM


Kristen~
Always, always it is a treat to find you gracing the pages with the beauty of your thoughts~

Lovely is this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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11 posted 2005-06-27 03:46 PM


Oh my...this is simply beautifull...*hugs*

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