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Open Poetry #35
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sweetpoetess
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0 posted 2005-06-25 10:08 PM

I see the sun
Drop below the trees
I see the silhouettes
Of the birds flying over me
As the sun disappears
Completely

Poetry is beauty in words.
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1 posted 2005-06-25 10:26 PM

you paint a beautiful picture
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-06-25 11:03 PM

very nice
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