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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-06-25 06:11 PM


Blazon

It was just a symbol on your earnest sweaty brow matching the sweat

Symbol

It was just an acknowledgment of growing from child to parent

Parent

It was just an ackowledgment of something you knew nothing of

Child

It was just a feeling of security and love and learning

World

It was just a chance of existence

Race

It was just an equal set of blocks for all

Religion

It was just a belief that paid money
That went away for the receipients careers

Terriorism

It is a statement of failure

Politics
No comment

Sun rises
Politican

Sun sets
Politician

Politican's life
See above for the next four words including spaces

Life

A bunch of people who make life, live life and enjoy life

Empowerment

Knowledge existing to empower

Just

Decide for yourself which is just

And what do you believe in enough

To make happen

What you believe in


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-06-25 07:40 PM


"Just

Decide for yourself which is just

And what do you believe in enough

To make happen"


that says it right there...


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2005-06-25 07:49 PM


Have to agree with Sea!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-06-26 02:46 AM


very cool write!
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-06-26 03:10 AM


Clever, intriguing, interesting and unique!

...and as for "Politics ~ no comment" definitely works for me! lol

Warm, welcoming hug,
EA

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-06-26 09:29 AM


Life

A bunch of people who make life, live life and enjoy life

Empowerment

Knowledge existing to empower

Just

~*~

Many ways to capture a few lines which stand out to each individual, Bodger.  Good job!

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