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Tndeer1
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0 posted 2005-06-25 02:57 AM


Inspired by a little Beagle pup that had been abandoned by our home and to all of God's animals.


"No-Body Wants Me"

I don't understand why this had to be
I just need someone to Love me you see
Out here in this place I'm not even grown
They just left me here I'm so all alone

Could it be because I made some mistakes
Then why not teach me that's all that it takes
Please look in my eyes it's all you should do
And there you will see I hurt just like you

I know I'm not cute like I use to be
Inside I'm the same why can't no-one see
I have so much Love that I want to share
I don't need allot just someone to care

Don't you realize that God made me too?
I'm special to him I should be to you
So what do I do? I don't really know
I'm hungry and scared with no-where to go

If I could just speak and walk like you do
I never would let this happen to you
I'm sure there are others I'll probably see
No-body wants them  “No-Body Wants Me”


© By: Freda H. Babinski      7-15-94

Tndeer1

© Copyright 2005 Freda H. Babinski - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-06-25 07:13 AM


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such a precious write here

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-06-25 07:17 AM


Freda, yours is a heart
I hope to read often.

Thank you for this treasure!


latearrival
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3 posted 2005-06-25 08:00 AM


Welcome to PIPs. Enjoying what you write. Thank you. martyjo
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2005-06-25 08:09 AM


I know the feeling...every pet I have owned was a "lost and found" one...with no one claiming them.

Welcome to PIP

M

Tndeer1
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5 posted 2005-06-25 11:32 PM


Thank You all for the beautiful words, the picture and for the warm welcome. I was beginning to wonder if anyone knew I was even here yet.
God Bless!

Tndeer1

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-06-26 12:28 PM


Beautiful...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2005-06-26 05:00 PM


Such a beautiful tender write.
I very much enjoy your style and grace.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tndeer1
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since 2005-06-24
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8 posted 2005-06-27 12:26 PM


I want to thank each of you for all the sweet comments. Everyone is so very talented here. I really wasn't sure I would fit in but I thought it was worth a try. God has truly Blessed each of you and this site.
God Bless!

Tndeer1

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