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Open Poetry #35
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Huan Yi
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-06-24 05:27 PM


Flash
Across the blue
A glint
On polished steel
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-06-24 05:44 PM

Lord Michael???

I invoked Uriel, Raphael, Gabriel, and Michael to stand en garde at the four corners of my home!

Divinely electifying!

Love & Angel Light,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-26-2005 04:04 AM).]
Startime55
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2 posted 2005-06-24 05:53 PM

Powerfully stunning...your words grab the attention then evolve into a vision...Well done...*hugs*
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-06-24 06:30 PM

STUNNING!!!!

.....and Happy Birthday!
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-06-24 07:25 PM

nice one here

and yes...Happy Birthday
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
5 posted 2005-06-25 01:13 AM

Amazing how you can put so much emotion and 'electricity' into such a small space

I have quickly become a fan of your writing m'friend and this one does not disappoint

Great writing

Tima
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2005-06-25 05:02 PM

I have often wondered how the Biblical angel, usually described as a terrifying phenomenon, became this -->

So if you haven't gathered, I particularly enjoyed this as it has the advantage of the emotion evoked as a stunning neutrality.

and for the Earth Angel--me too, 'cept my Ariel was Gabriel.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-06-26 12:31 PM

I believe there were three...Michael, Gabriel and Lucifer...Lucifer fell...James
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2005-06-26 04:04 AM

Oops! Regarding Serenity's comment, I hope Gabriel forgives me! I meant to say "Gabriel"! I'm going back to change it and give Gabriel his due!
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