Open Poetry #35 |
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Kurai Kumo Junior Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 32Houston, Texas, USA |
I remember it like it was yesterday, The times we would just sit here and talk all night with you, You would try and take all the pain and hurt away, I would just sit there and look at you in your eyes and smile, Thinking that I was invisible to the world, But now your gone and the pain and hurt is coming back, Missing those simple and endless nights, Will you ever come back to me? I don't think I can make it anymore, My life just isn't the same without you, Could I ever find someone just like you again? Could I ever be happy again? I love you, I miss you, I would always think about you and that you would be here again, But I just shed tears cause your not here, I'm going to take the one step closer to the edge, Maybe I'll see you again, I would just think at night, That you would be watching down from heaven and smile at me, I'll never forgot you! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP Kurai Kumo. This really evokes alot of emotion and intense feelings. I certainly can feel the love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can certainly relate to this a sadly beautiful write here Welcome to Passions |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
a very heartfelt write ![]() |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Heartbreaking write and yes it was so heartfelt Hope |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your pain is expressed so perfectly that my tears flowed freely during the read...My heart goes out to you...*big hugs* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...we will always miss those we cared for...James |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Ah, lost love, is there anything more painful? Heartrending Maggie |
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