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Kurai Kumo
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since 2005-06-23
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Houston, Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-06-24 01:01 AM


I remember it like it was yesterday,
The times we would just sit here and talk all night with you,
You would try and take all the pain and hurt away,
I would just sit there and look at you in your eyes and smile,
Thinking that I was invisible to the world,
But now your gone and the pain and hurt is coming back,
Missing those simple and endless nights,
Will you ever come back to me?
I don't think I can make it anymore,
My life just isn't the same without you,
Could I ever find someone just like you again?
Could I ever be happy again?
I love you,
I miss you,
I would always think about you and that you would be here again,
But I just shed tears cause your not here,
I'm going to take the one step closer to the edge,
Maybe I'll see you again,
I would just think at night,
That you would be watching down from heaven and smile at me,
I'll never forgot you!

© Copyright 2005 Keith A Rusler - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2005-06-24 01:56 AM


Welcome to PIP Kurai Kumo.  

This really evokes alot of emotion and intense feelings.  I certainly can feel the love.  

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-06-24 04:24 AM


I can certainly relate to this
a sadly beautiful write here

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3 posted 2005-06-24 08:55 AM


a very heartfelt write
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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4 posted 2005-06-24 12:16 PM


Heartbreaking write and yes it was so heartfelt

Hope

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2005-06-24 12:20 PM


Your pain is expressed so perfectly that my tears flowed freely during the read...My heart goes out to you...*big hugs*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2005-06-26 12:27 PM


Nice writing...we will always miss those we cared for...James
cusick
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7 posted 2005-06-26 09:38 AM


Ah, lost love, is there anything more painful?
Heartrending

Maggie

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