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Every Tiny Light
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Every Tiny Light |
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isolated poet New Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 3 |
Every Tiny Light All across the entire field, each light standing alone, its fate seems sealed. Until the edge of your sight, every spark on its own seems like it will lose the fight. But each little flash is for a higher plan, a seed on the stone, and just one blade on the fan. Because every tiny light, keeps a flame burning in the night. And together every little spark burns a hope in the dark. And in the dark black silent wood, every torch sets the tone, that anything can be withstood. And when your falling apart, and cant feel, every candle forms a bone, to hold out together, to heal. And out in the great unknown, every voice sings into the phone, to remind you, you’re not alone because every tiny light, keeps a flame burning in the night. And together every little spark burns a hope in the dark. comments? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"And in the dark black silent wood, every torch sets the tone, that anything can be withstood." What a wonderfully done, positive message of hope! Loved it! Welcome to Passions! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions. A very enlightening poem! believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very well done...I love the rhyme scheme  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this a lot, and not to be a jerk, but you really don't have to ask us to comment, we will gladly  |
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