Open Poetry #35 |
Angelina Belle |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Angelina Belle Angelina belle, sitting there on my porch heart still cold from some old blown out torch and I'm not there to shower her with loving eyes and she's thinking about some other guy the football jacket wrapped around her tight I need to get back and tend to her darkest nights Angelina belle, up for sale and I'm gonna steal her away someday Angel in blue jeans, standing on Embarcadero as Golden Gate embraces the returning heroes and I'm not there to distract her with my adoration when she's wanting to grab the boys' attention my heart races to run and keep her to my self till she's ready to love, keep her up on the shelf Angelina belle, been through hell and I'm gonna rescue her away someday Angelina tells me where to go she's painted like a pink flamingo and I'm there, in the smoke, watching her as she would bring out the ghost in her the night wrapped around her like chiffon she needs to hear a little melancholy song Angelina belle, heart like a carousel and I'm gonna ride it till the world fades away Angel in white gardenias, laughing like a waterfall as this golden heart aches for her to call and she's not here to swim in my adoration she's always out there, drowning in boys' attention her heartbeats are in tune with mine and so I run to her tonight only to find Angelina belle, went off the rails and I know I gotta save her some way And I know I'm gonna pay someday someday soon for even as I am the tide to her moon she'll recover from her emotional wounds and leave me behind someday but hey, what can I say I can't help but love her so for now I'll do whatever I can to show her she's something else in the world not your ordinary average girl even if she won't love me... Angelina belle, sitting there on my porch tears falling from some newly blown out torch and I'm prepared to shower her with loving eyes and she's thinking about giving up on guys the cold evening wrapped around her tight I find I want to get back with her, treat her right but Angelina belle, I know her too well she's gonna steal herself away someday But for now...I don't care "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I LOVED every single word of this...it's like a song...I really tried to pick a favorite line, but they all go together so perfectly... I am sooooo keeping this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning piece of work here! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
((just making sure this got into my library!)) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
georgeous write, enjoyed |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I'm not good at this orginial response thing but I agree with the above..I enjoyed every word If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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