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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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scratching in the barnyard dust fluttering the wings too brief crowing sepia and dawn remember mississippi mud layering the bruise of clay cutting like a layered cake blues and oranges and green and little things in print of plead begging to be stone, agreed: pecking in the dirt for seed dancing to be heard and freed bickering the chickens home, roosters scream toward the sun; praying twice the day. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh wow where do you find the inspiration? dang, I love this one, but I can't really say why, I just do |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, my brilliant poet friend, those good moments in life are brief, and when they leave they certainly can be a cutting edge, but then, perhaps they are in some way a reminder, that they haven't left at all, more so, have found a sacred place in our hearts minds and souls... hugs hun...love you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
crowing sepia and dawn remember mississippi mud layering the bruise of clay cutting like a layered cake blues and oranges and green and little things in print of plead begging to be stone, agreed: pecking in the dirt for seed dancing to be heard and freed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you are me queen of imagery and symbols with this one K... then lets talk about rhyme speak... you rock lovie  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
JM stole the lines I loved... love it and you Karen. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, I really do wish I could do it like this  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Making castles in the sand and watch them wash away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There be more than a glimmer of brilliance in this write!  Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You know what is truly amazing about this, Karen? I saw all of that, right there -BOOM! And that, is what writing is all about. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
pecking in the dirt for seed dancing to be heard and freed yup, these lines spoke to me m'lady.. and the imagery? Magnificent! luvs ya mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm a bit late in reading this but am so glad I did. One day when ... ?? ... I'll learn to write like this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
warmth of egg under nimble touch feathers sticking to the birth, a mother's hope a breakfast broke... I remember this... ~*~ Thank you for the taking me back moment... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
cock a doodle do?  thanks all felt a need to lay an egg  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
egg....lol....you're a silly RIR! Sure did like this though. hugs to you, K-lady! ...jo |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I LOVE eggs hehe this was great.. reminded me of being little and playing with papa's chickens in the yard, and then crying when he made us eat them thanks for the childhood memories |
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