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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-06-23 09:25 PM





~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2005-06-23 09:29 PM


How beautiful Marge...
and the colors!!  WOW!!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2005-06-23 10:04 PM


The written irony of the "light of night" coupled with that there is an actual light of night, makes this poem work... enjoyed!
PatAngel
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3 posted 2005-06-23 10:50 PM


"In a soft whisper it's gone away"! What a beautiful ending Marge! Loved it.

Love and hugs,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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4 posted 2005-06-23 11:24 PM


SO beautiful Marge! Lovely
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5 posted 2005-06-24 12:15 PM


WOW

what a great write from an image...

the night comes and takes the day in hand, and then saves it till tomorrow....

This was beautiful

Tima

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6 posted 2005-06-24 04:45 AM


I watch it every day...what a beautiful tribute
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7 posted 2005-06-24 07:42 AM


the title alone alured me, then the words...so gentle, hypnotizing and refreshing...hugs for this
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2005-06-24 09:03 AM


Thank you ALL~
One special moment last evening just begging to be lens-captured~

I soooooo enjoy sharing with you all~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2005-06-24 10:30 AM


good read
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2005-06-24 10:33 AM


Another delightful post that you have graced your readers with!

Love & Twi-Light,
EO

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11 posted 2005-06-24 11:56 AM


With gentle words that matched the picture perfectly...what a wonderful feeling your words grant...I love it...*big hugs*

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12 posted 2005-06-24 06:32 PM


Dear Marge:  A beautiful time of day,  This is lovely.

Love
Betty Lou

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13 posted 2005-06-24 07:26 PM


One of my favourite time of day is that transition between day and night.  I often marvel at the quality of the light.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Betty
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14 posted 2005-06-25 08:39 AM


Beautiful for sure
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15 posted 2005-06-25 10:20 AM


The poem and the image are very beatiful marge

Maggie

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16 posted 2005-06-25 11:04 AM


You are so fortunate to live in an area where these scenes can be captured. Beautifully done!
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17 posted 2005-06-26 01:23 AM


Ain't that the truth!  Lovely, Marge.   ....jo
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