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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-06-24 12:59 PM


From That Day Forth

In a relationship no one has ever taken
my freedom away, for if I am with a
woman I desire I freely give her my heart.
To give someone my love is never a loss.
If anything, everything is gained.

She loved to tell me that she loved me
but I knew that her words were untrue,
when she started telling me that she
felt trapped and needed her freedom.
I told her this, "I'm not stopping you."
From that day forth, I never felt
the same about her.

JamesLee
June23
2005

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-06-24 04:25 AM


well, that stinks
but it happens


scorpio
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right...there
2 posted 2005-06-24 04:56 PM


You seem to have taken it well. Soldier on James.

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-06-25 12:09 PM


Thank you passing and scorpio for the nice responses...I'm taking this well because it happened long ago...after awhile acceptence comes more easily...James
timothysangel1973
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4 posted 2005-06-25 01:14 AM


Glad to see that this isn't something that just happened, and you are correct my friend - time does have a way of making acceptance a little sweeter on the heart

Another great write

Tima

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