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Open Poetry #35

Staking My Claim

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-06-19 02:10 AM

my spot,
this place beneath
your arm, a perfect fit
when I snuggle close each morning
and sigh

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2005-06-19 02:13 AM

Oh this one reminds of doing the same thing....

This is short, sweet, and absolutly wonderful!!!!

A tiny treasure!!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-06-19 03:36 AM

sweet

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2005-06-20 03:41 PM

Beki ...Short ... but very special. Bob

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-06-20 03:49 PM

Beki~
'perfect' is right !
And this is poetic perfection to be sure~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-06-20 08:17 PM

Fantastic...love this...James

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2005-06-23 12:57 PM

Yes.....and isn't cinquain a wonderful medium for catching a moment? You use it well.

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2005-06-23 02:42 PM

Oh, yes... just this! *S* I love it! *S*

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

8 posted 2005-06-23 03:56 PM

Very nice mood setting piece

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-06-25 12:11 PM

Revisit...James

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