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kodak moments |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
kodak moments turn them one by one cards in the deck of someone else’s joy each one a view the same but slightly subtly changed scenes through windows along the path outside the faces smiles eyes say so much and see the changes frame to frame but always seen from just outside the in the best is a picture of a feeling of something you could not share might have shared were once until it winnowed into pictures a deck to riffle slowly all windowed in frame by frame smile try for it is love to find somehow a happiness looking in this way from out pull it in carefully oh carefully bring in the lace map of wistfulness now and follow |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the faces smiles eyes say so much and see the changes frame to frame but always seen from just outside the in Sometimes the view of another's joy is seen through a mist... from being outside the in and knowing such joy only second hand. Your words directed my thoughts to several paths... all poignant... I don't know... and yet... I do. Excellent write! |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very much enjoyed this one. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie "for it is love to find somehow a happiness looking in this way from out" I understand this.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...good to read you again |
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