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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-06-23 07:04 AM


as for the tiles of life, a well-loved habit
somewhat autonomous with face
face of plausible roots, like a spotlight
of afternoon staring wide-eyed deep into
a chafing wind

as day walks, streets of silk
functioning, in large capacity
living a transformative force
in unlimited fashion, which never
destroys and each day becomes
hopelessly confident

it never damages…
and we don’t have forever to get-together
with this extreme richness of feeling
to touch unique intensity of thoughts
in the landscape of soul

a voice of expression, indispensable
flashes light, murmuring what we
dream of hearing, touching, feeling,
with full tanks of quality time
and a twenty four hour nurse
the 101 of affirming words
which act and communicate
a dialect of emotional patterns
appreciated
love


© Copyright 2005 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-06-23 07:39 AM


LeeJ
Good morning love, well you realy nailed that down. Are you prepared for this day?

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-06-23 09:11 AM


Lee~

'tiles of life'

I LIKE that !!!!

Think I'll order some today !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Suetang
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3 posted 2005-06-23 06:10 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Lee.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
4 posted 2005-06-23 10:29 PM


sounds like youre in a good place with your self
very lifting and hopefull

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2005-06-23 10:55 PM


I too, got my appreciation of this from "tiles of life" as I've a particular fondness for mosaic, which is a very apt metaphor, methinks, for life.

Well done Ms. Lee.

You are a deep well full of sweet cool water.


passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-06-24 04:44 AM


oh, I did like this one!
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