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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Shadows flee the shore Night's tidal wave rolling in It will catch them all |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Adding that extra "l" was brillliant! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
LLOLL--AND a typo! Thank you -- good or not, 't must go.....my edit shall catch it like a -- -- tidal wave rollllllling in! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ This moved so gently ... I could 'see' it~ Good show !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed You captured the beauty and the mystery just right! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent imagery a fine write |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 I dunno...I thought it was great the way it was! Put it back! LOL...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loved this and you, for your originality.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You have such a gift, my friend... in a few vivid syllables, you transport us from our mundane worlds into a magic no less enchanting because it's repeated daily... This is so beautiful... |
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