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marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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az, usa

0 posted 2005-06-19 10:19 PM


No One Can Love You More

No one can love you more than I,
Through winters bitterness and cold
You will find warmth inside my heart.
When struggling with the harshness of reality,
You will find peace within my soul.
If its flowers that put a smile on your face,
Let me take you to a place where roses bloom forever.
And if you make a mistake,
Forsaking me for another’s embrace
My parting kiss will love you even more.


Marcel

© Copyright 2005 keith marcel - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-06-19 10:23 PM


The art of acknowledging
an ache of letting go,
as strong as the love
that built the bond
in the beginning...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-06-20 01:24 AM


Nice thoughts...I wonder about the mistake part...is it a mistake or a deliberate decision...James
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2005-06-20 02:51 AM


Loving them no matter what....
Very nice!!!!  

HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2005-06-20 02:52 AM


enjoyed this one

good to read you again

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2005-06-20 08:48 AM


How beautifully you have expressed the tenderness of eternal fidelity...from the heart.
Enjoyed this.
TD

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-06-20 08:50 AM


Marcel, this gave me chills, the extreme bliss and comfort of this, like the meditative essense life is supposed to be

hugs you!

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