Open Poetry #35 |
No One Can Love You More |
marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
No One Can Love You More No one can love you more than I, Through winters bitterness and cold You will find warmth inside my heart. When struggling with the harshness of reality, You will find peace within my soul. If its flowers that put a smile on your face, Let me take you to a place where roses bloom forever. And if you make a mistake, Forsaking me for another’s embrace My parting kiss will love you even more. Marcel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The art of acknowledging an ache of letting go, as strong as the love that built the bond in the beginning... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...I wonder about the mistake part...is it a mistake or a deliberate decision...James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Loving them no matter what.... Very nice!!!! HUGS, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this one good to read you again |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How beautifully you have expressed the tenderness of eternal fidelity...from the heart. Enjoyed this. TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Marcel, this gave me chills, the extreme bliss and comfort of this, like the meditative essense life is supposed to be hugs you! |
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