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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2005-06-19 06:46 PM

O fatherless veteran
you dare spit into my heaven
up on your slow horse
blinding me once again

the sky falls

and you touch me

with your demon flames

O wicked star

you inconsiderate bastard

you cry like a stag
in slow uniformed strokes
you singe the morn

and i

go-on
with my mouth-organ

below tree shadows

below sand and stone

and you will prick me
through the limbs

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-06-19 07:48 PM

wow, what a spill m'friend....
feeling this one M'lady...

Hugs
~D~

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-06-19 09:14 PM

I don't know
where this came from,
but I'd like to see it again...

damn magnificent!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-06-19 09:17 PM

OMG!! What an incredible write!
Well done Maree.
Hugs to you lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-06-19 09:22 PM

Wheew!!! You can write it sister...!!!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-06-19 11:05 PM

Diving deep into my eyes,
each stroke and slap
of your smile,
creates stark lines
like worm holes
through my skin.

I am the dirt you shine upon.

Black as night,
black as coal,
black as the teeth
once dangling from the mouth
of Charon.

Who awaits
one half-brother,
in search of the other.

_________________________________

(I adored this, Maree. Spit into my heaven, God, I wish I had written that.)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2005-06-19 11:16 PM

The sun has been annoying the hell outta me too.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2005-06-20 12:03 PM

Mmmhmmm...

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

8 posted 2005-06-20 12:17 PM

WOW!

I echo everyone before me here and theres nothing else I can say that will make it clearer to you that this was AWESOME

Great writing dear poetess

Tima

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

9 posted 2005-06-20 11:06 AM

Isn't it coming on winter there?

Definate M flavour to this one- but how pray tell did you get away with using bastard?-- I once had to change a poem because of that word--lol

hugs Mmy

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-06-20 12:06 PM

yeah

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2005-06-20 12:48 PM

While repeating all of the comments above..marvelous!!!!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2005-06-20 05:23 PM

m'Gentle One, thank you Bella

Thanks Kari, I hope to see it again myself

Thank you Nancy, glad you liked

Martie, awww thank you

Sue, Whoa, what a response... love it and thank you. Perhaps soon, a duet? eh?

M'lady Serenity, yes and i thought of you while it annoyed the hell outta me.

back  Thank you m'love.

Kaoru, thank you for popping in, it's always lovely to see you and thanks for the "Mmmhmmm..."

TimsAngel, thanks for the wow and the awesome, much appreciated and for popping in.

Jamie, yes it is winter here, but the sun does not only burn (which it didn't)  m'friend..it blinds the eyes.
and about that word, you just used it dear

PS, thanks

LeeJ, thank you so much.

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

13 posted 2005-06-20 09:07 PM

Well, it could be raining- and it's much easier to carry 'round a pair of shades than it is an umbrella-- though the umbrella is easier to keep up with. I've lost far more sunglasses.

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2005-06-21 11:45 AM

I would be MOST honored . . . of course and the funny thing is at the end of my reply I write of the twins and what pops up right after but your other half LOL

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2005-06-22 01:10 AM

Sadly, consideration is over rated.
Nice spill, Ms. Maree~
Loved your title too!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

16 posted 2005-06-22 09:35 AM

wow, this is amazing!

I know I know..I say that a lot...but it's sooo true

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

17 posted 2005-06-22 11:39 PM

Sometimes you're so deep it's scary!

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