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| Open Poetry #35 |
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Three Friends |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Three Friends Little stars on silver pond Dance on glass and float along Milky moon in lustrous phase Strips of pearl on rippled glaze Crystal tears on cheeks of rose Crimson heartaches gently pose Willow‘s swaying, bending limb Hums a lover’s saddest hymn Swishing lilts of teardrop leaves Lifted by the evening breeze Rustling whispers meant to calm Lonely heart with solemn song Here I sit by silent lake Pondering my grave mistake Stars and moon and willow tree Such is sorrow’s company Elizabeth Santos |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very beautiful in its melancholy. Love, Margherita |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Little stars on silver pond Dance on glass and float along Milky moon in lustrous phase Strips of pearl on rippled glaze Crystal tears on cheeks of rose Crimson heartaches gently pose Willow‘s swaying, bending limb Hums a lover’s saddest hymn myohmy is this a bittersweet beauty... such a lovely melding of imagey and expression.... and as always...your cadence is poetry in motion. Beautiful writing dear potess of grace. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Oh !! I just loved this Elizabeth, what a beautiful write i was there with you  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this so aptly attributes those deep moments, when humans seem to enjoy an alone bittersweet moment, and in that we learn to comfort the atrocities of life...we learn to accept the essense of it all...and we know, we've done nothing wrong...we just grew along the way, with our children...with our friends, with the hum of nature... Hugs to you, my poetess lady, you are incredible! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved it |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Stars and moon and willow tree Such is sorrow’s company Truer words were never spoken!  I saw a willow tree drop a tear Watched it float to the grass near. I picked it up and felt its grace Hoping I could see her face. Time erases many things too soon, Except sorrow, Willow, stars, and moon. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you dear Elizabeth for waking the ole muse for Willow. /pip/Forum92/HTML/003557.html Hope you are the gopher are doing well and getting along now? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
After all these years I'm still in awe of how you do this so well...you are a treasure  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Achingly beautiful...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You inspire so beautifully, Liz... this was beautiful. Thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz...this is enchanting!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth I agree with Balladeer. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
What could I possibly say that hasn't already been said.... Beautifully bittersweet!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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