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Open Poetry #35

'Tis been a long week...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2005-06-17 10:23 PM

I had me a girlfriend, her name was Suzie,
Suzie the floozie, she was a real doozie,
Her lips were bright red, I think from the wine,
She drank as a chaser, after sippin’ some “shine”,
She lived in a shack, out past the mill,
Out in the woods, by Big Daddy’s still.
There was but one problem, with Suzie and me,
Big Daddy and I, had a problem you see,
Big Daddy desired, that I didn’t woo her,
‘Cause he hadn’t much use, for a young revenuer.
Big Daddy’s buck shot, flyin’ over my head,
It got me to thinkin’, that he wished me dead,
He thought I was comin’, to bust up his still,
And I really do think, that he meant to kill,
This poor revenuer, who it seemed had the hots,
For his little Suzie, I liked her a lots.
It seemed to me, it was love or my job,
Or maybe my life, she made my (heart) throb,
So I turned in my badge, gave up my career,
So with my dear Suzie, I could be near,
I moved out past the mill, in a little old shack,
With Big Daddy and Suzie, I didn’t look back,
Now I am the lookout, Big Daddy’s main man,
An integral part, of Big Daddy’s clan,
Suzie and me, I sure wish you knew her,
Well adios, goodbye, from an ex-revenuer.

Midnitesun