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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-06-16 05:54 PM




Set them free, all
blue, gold, brown, green
blinded, some binded
by spells sweetly cast
endearingly bitter whispers    
braid willing souls deep
in total unwanted keep

free them
all the butterflies
caught without flaw on
a crystal maybe
dancers in colors
hopelessly hoping
yes, blinded
and unable to see

they are just like me...


~tier

© Copyright 2005 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-06-16 05:57 PM


whoa! this is fantastic!
Tiersdin
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2 posted 2005-06-16 06:06 PM


Thank you, SEA!


~tier

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3 posted 2005-06-17 01:32 AM


Amazing, I love it!

You write amazingly.

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4 posted 2005-06-17 09:19 AM


wanted to make sure I put this in my library!
Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-06-17 09:39 AM


Beautiful....amazing write Tier~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2005-06-17 11:07 PM


Very nice!!!!!

Bridgette

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7 posted 2005-06-18 05:36 AM


good write
darn good

littlewing
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8 posted 2005-06-18 12:31 PM


this may be way off mark, but it reminded me of days ago when the stallions ran free on the plains and wondering just how we all ended up in these insane city streets surrounded by suburbia when we should be sitting upon the ground surrounding a campfire . . .
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