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Once Upon A Garden
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Once Upon A Garden |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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 Lovely lavender lilacs Lazily lifting life Living lavishly Laughing luminously at leprechauns Precocious pansies And prickly pears Play politely to prayers Posing pleasantly Beautiful butterflies Bathe in brightness Briskly breathe at blossoms Behaving bottled brilliance Teasing tulips trapezing Trusting tender tiptoes Tasting the tender tantrums Of the tipitty-tapping toads Dallying daffodils Dropping ditties at daybreak During drip-dropping dew Dousing the dawdling duckling Sweet snapdragons Snipping snarls at snails In sassy sureness of spring Surviving simple sanity Rare roses Revealing readiness Reciting recurrent recollections Reclaiming rediscovery Whispering willow Wavering in the westward wind Wafting wishes While weathering woodpeckers Melancholy mishaps Merrily modify marigolds Masquerading the map of May Mopping mirrors of madness "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (06-20-2005 01:01 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, do I know an alliterative moth who is going to dance all over this! Wonderful job, JB! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
This was fun to read. Especially enjoyed this one: "Beautiful butterflies Bathe in brightness Briskly breathe at blossoms Behaving bottled brilliance" Their brilliance I would just love to bottle! It sounds like you had a lot of fun with the alliteration! Enjoyed. miscee |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
an enjoyable read makes me want to plant a garden good to read you again glad you're back |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Enjoyed this garden poem, and the way you played with the sounds of words...  -----------ice ><> |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bridgette~ Hi there sweetie pie~ Can I tell you just how WONDERFUL it is to see you ... VERY !!! Hope all is well in your corner of the world~ Thanks for coming 'home'~  This is right up my alley ... and you already know that !!!! Just stupendous, poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have framed little poems from Passions in my home, and this one of yours really tickled my tongue, and also my fancy!  I have also pasted poems to the backs of all my artwork in the house, just words I found here and there at Passions that other people wrote that describe well how I feel about or see a particular painting. Here is where I am going to puts yours later today. It sure suits it don't you think?Front  Back  So welcome to my home Bridgette, you I will pass by every day in the hall from now on. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I really enjoyed this as I have surrounded my house with gardens. I love the play with words. They roll beautifully. Thank You and Mysteria,love what you did.. martyjo |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Karilea you're sooo cute....I'm sure I know who that is but my head is drawing a blank. I'm happy that you enjoyed this!!!Thank You!!!! Miscee I had a lot of fun with this. I just might try it again. Thank You!!!! Dixie...it's nice to see you too. You little angel of the archives. Thanks!!!! Ice...the sounds of it are fun and yes I loved the play of this one. Thank You!!!! Marge....It's great to be home. My muse finally decided it wanted to come out and play. I wrote 3 poems in a 24 hour period. And loved every minute of it. But, I think what I love more is seeing the friendly words of others gracing my screen for me to read. I need to come by and play more often. I'm happy to see you also. And I'm glad you enjoyed. You are such a sweetheart!!!! Thank You!!!! Sharon....your painting is beautiful. I am very very honored to be up in your home. Thank YOU so very much. Sweet lady. Martyjo, That is so cool that you have gardens around your house. It brightens up everything around you...gardens do. It was playful fun. Thank You!!!!  HUGS AND LOTS OF LOVE, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink [This message has been edited by Justbleu (06-18-2005 07:53 PM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
What fun this was to read! Thanks, SG |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this reminded me so much of Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young . . . Suite Judy Blue Eyes . . . |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Henceforth heavenly hydrangeas hither, honeysuckle hummingbirds hover, heaving holiday horseradish... (does happy hummingbird dance) yay, couldn't resist, I'm a sucker for alliteration too, hehe! (giggles) This is sooooooo pretty, sweet friend, I hope you've been having many joyous times in the garden this spring, yay, God Bless You, I'm soooooo happy to be reading your poetry again, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Greatly enjoyable creation, a wonderful vision! And to Sharon: I love your painting very much and how you add poems to your artwork. Great idea! Love, Margherita : |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'm a tardy moth but I'm GIDDY... Alliterations rock!! I love reading them aloud!! Welcome back to the blue pages Lady Bleu so nice to see you here again. my thanks to the friends who e-d me this one, knowing Id enjoy it. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Check your email - I sent you some snapdragons Lovely write as I said before. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful alliteration Bridgette! What a treasure to read aloud (which is precisely what I did!) Much enjoyed this. Best wishes, /Kit |
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