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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-06-16 08:50 AM


This.

What is this?

Frustration and anger,
Perhaps even questioning
and discontent

There is too much inside

Behind walls of emotion I hide
Brewing, it grows stronger with time

I wish it would flow as such

Pouring out, in streaming rush....
These feelings of helplessness
Not knowing what to do

Through silent screams
My pen I hear

Begging me,
to expel my fears

         To write

To write

Purging in surge
Breathing, while bleeding

Inhaling deep
Pushing out the blue
Lifting eyes to skies
In seek of some light

To finally break through
This noir of life

Birthing New


{Suz? thank you...}


I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-16-2005 09:26 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-06-16 09:09 AM



and...voilá!

A poet is born!

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-06-16 09:48 AM


It feels good to write Karilea,

but somehow I'm just not sure if I've
screamed loud enough yet. *s*  Thanks mama K.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-06-16 10:15 AM


very powerful write


littlewing
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4 posted 2005-06-16 10:21 AM


a rebirth!  I  love seeing this, no need thanking me, silly, thank yourself . . .

Your writing is just flowing . . .

Feels good, don't it?

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5 posted 2005-06-16 10:25 AM


Great outpouring of feelings here Donna...
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-06-19 09:39 AM


thanks everyone.  Peace and hugs.
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7 posted 2005-06-19 05:12 PM


such plentiful expressions of emotions m'gentle one.



mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

timothysangel1973
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8 posted 2005-06-20 12:50 PM


wow!

ya know... I think that my muse (the unthankful huzzy) has taken a vacation... and without even asking - IMAGINE the nerve lol

This was a very powerful write, and I only aspire to write like some of you one day when I grow up and decide what I wanna be

This one deserves another round

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Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2005-06-20 10:53 AM


Maree, I miss you around here Bella, thanks for stopping in.

Tima   thank you for that, but I too say that same thing...I WISH I could write like that....but that is so sweet of you to say, and I thank you.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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10 posted 2005-06-20 02:00 PM


GentlestSpirit~

I see no bramble on this poetic 'ramble'~
Way to go girlie girl~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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11 posted 2005-06-20 02:28 PM


you are indeed a poetess of many loving images, humble, brilliant as the sun's rays, and feeling life's potent messages along the way...loved this one of yours lady jane...exceptional feelings brings the reader to feel an birth...Ramble?  I think not!
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