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| Open Poetry #35 |
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Purge In Surge, Birthing New (ramble series) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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This. What is this? Frustration and anger, Perhaps even questioning and discontent There is too much inside Behind walls of emotion I hide Brewing, it grows stronger with time I wish it would flow as such Pouring out, in streaming rush.... These feelings of helplessness Not knowing what to do Through silent screams My pen I hear Begging me, to expel my fears To write To write Purging in surge Breathing, while bleeding Inhaling deep Pushing out the blue Lifting eyes to skies In seek of some light To finally break through This noir of life Birthing New {Suz?  thank you...}I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-16-2005 09:26 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and...voilá! A poet is born! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It feels good to write Karilea, but somehow I'm just not sure if I've screamed loud enough yet. *s* Thanks mama K. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very powerful write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
a rebirth! I love seeing this, no need thanking me, silly, thank yourself . . . Your writing is just flowing . . . Feels good, don't it? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great outpouring of feelings here Donna... Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks everyone. Peace and hugs. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
such plentiful expressions of emotions m'gentle one.  mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
wow! ya know... I think that my muse (the unthankful huzzy) has taken a vacation... and without even asking - IMAGINE the nerve lol This was a very powerful write, and I only aspire to write like some of you one day when I grow up and decide what I wanna be This one deserves another round  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Maree, I miss you around here Bella, thanks for stopping in. Tima  thank you for that, but I too say that same thing...I WISH I could write like that....but that is so sweet of you to say, and I thank you. I really want to care, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ I see no bramble on this poetic 'ramble'~ Way to go girlie girl~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are indeed a poetess of many loving images, humble, brilliant as the sun's rays, and feeling life's potent messages along the way...loved this one of yours lady jane...exceptional feelings brings the reader to feel an birth...Ramble? I think not! |
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