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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2005-06-17 03:16 PM


Listen to the raindrop chorus
Danceing round your head
Sing it song of days long gone
of showers that have fell upon

Listen to the raindrop chorus
Playing it bass drum tunes
as sunlight dances inside
And rainbows shine right through

Listen to the raindrop chorus
wash your blues away
clean the dirt from before us
and feed the crops and hay

Dance in the raindop chorus
For it doesn't come every day
Dance to the raindrop chorus
from dusk till break of day

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of  place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

© Copyright 2005 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2005-06-17 03:26 PM


BRAVO!!Last night we had a wonderful downpour...My husband and I love to be in the RV when it rains so we can go to sleep to the sound of singing rain...Your words capture the tune beautifully...*hugs*

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-06-17 10:21 PM


enjoyed the thought of listening to the raindrops chorus
as long as I can also hear the sun shine  

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2005-06-18 02:32 AM


Makes me want to go outside and play in the rain....

I loved reading this....what a wonderful write!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-06-18 04:29 AM


gotta love the rain

good write

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