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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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In the still I am lost on a journey for quest of more seeking but always arriving a day to late and I wait.... for today to pass bringing tomorrow into reality quicker possibly in form of better days but come what may because held in stillness no movement is found within this knowledge, I am bound binded by truth I remain still. I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
These words let me hear the quiet of your heart as it holds still waiting...Amazing and very powerful write...*big hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In the stillness truth unfolds. Very beautiful write, dear Donna. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and I wait.... for today to pass bringing tomorrow into reality quicker possibly in form of better days Oh, yes... I know this wait well... You've written time's slowing to stopped so very well! *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the structure of this one, and the way you use it to emphasize your meaning and bring in the atmosphere. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I've read and re read this.....knowing the still within the still....luv you gal....  I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
felt my heartbeat slow in pace with your spill of words... ~wow~ **baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely melancholy write sweet Donna. I know this feeling...this pause of wait. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
mon amie perhaps the still... is the comfort zone your heart needs at this moment in time in order to move safely forward when the time is right hugs to you, m'lady |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Find comfort in your stillness.... Good write!!!! Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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The One & Only Member
since 2005-01-26
Posts 58Kansas USA |
Thats just how i feel about somethings in my own life! Thanks for putting it into words for me!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Donna... this is a  for several reasons. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord, Donna, right along with the rest of us . . . |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Gosh, what a remarkable style you have. This was truly a wonderful write, and I am so glad that I was in here tonight to read it Great stuff m'friend  |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
good grief, if I had a brain I would be dangerous lol fergot to click the library button |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you all so very much, you are way to kind to me. Hugs to each of you, and peace. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I agree with everyone else on this read. A beautiful write. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna "still", Yes, understanding this place, Lovely and deep!  |
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