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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2005-06-12 10:25 PM

Storm Clouds Call

Just now,
the breath of life,
the silken nadir of being,

(burnished and sacrosanct),

was immersed within your oration.
The self-deception of summer's affliction was gone,
and cerulean lambrequins of regret,
of wretchedness,
came to asperse our voiceless truths.
Concealed by these opaque assurances of abhorrence,
I withered.

Denied your embrace,

(though a remembrance of your lips still burns within my words),

storm clouds gathered,
as my clenched hand opened softly beneath the despondent torrent of your farewell.
Let lissome tears fall,
for none will see their sculpted tracks upon these cheeks.
Into hurts’ maelstrom let whorl heartache.
Naught bridges this bitter divergence.

Plaited into the muddled ridges of chagrin,
quivers dogmatic clouds of precipitation.
Inasmuch as the deluge,
gibbers over my declining hues of aureate and ashen self-control,
I can not but feel disturbed by this departure of tenderness.

Somewhere above,
sea gulls thrash upon chalky wings,
silhouetted against this injurious tempest.
Vertigo disburses their wounds;
oh how I wish it could be so for me.
In the velvety crux of such vapors,
midst the azure of lightening,
I’d seek the stroke,
which could sear your goodbye,
from consciousness.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2005-06-12 11:19 PM

Vertigo disburses their wounds;
oh how I wish it could be so for me.
In the velvety crux of such vapors,
midst the azure of lightening,
I’d seek the stroke,
which could sear your goodbye,
from consciousness.

Oh if only it were that easy to erase some of the great loves......
well then we wouldnt have such eloquent words
nice to see you again in here, kevvy

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2005-06-13 12:23 PM

Kevin,
This is one great piece you have penned here.
A feeling I know too well.

Hugs to you from me

;-)

Amour Vous,

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

3 posted 2005-06-13 12:25 PM

Impressive array of vocabulary. Very sophisticated poem. I felt the last stanza was particularly effective as well

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2005-06-13 03:54 AM

ohh kevin.... how you pull at this heart, still.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-06-13 08:21 AM

Kevin, you do have a way with words! ~ and I certainly appreciate the length and breadth of your impressive vocabulary. You weave your words into magic.

This was an exquisite piece of poetry that captivated this reader.

Love & Light,
Linda

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2005-06-22 03:47 PM

Needed to bump this up again.
Still just as sweet.

:-)

Amour Vous,

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2005-06-22 03:56 PM

Good write!

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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