A Vortex Force That Draws Us In...(Inspired by Sunshines "Poetry Generator")

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A Vortex Force That Draws Us In...(Inspired by Sunshines "Poetry Generator")

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2005-06-15 07:34 AM

*In the crevice of ecstasy the planets swim,
Evolving more than nine, endless
Spirit potential, though invisible;

A vortex force that draws us in,
To open primal explosion gifts;
Sent wrapped in human skin.

What was born there has left,
But returns after journey.
Bouncing off the outer-limit wall
Back to the center of gravity;
Controlled by parabolic law.

Praise be to the God that made
Visible by physical ways,
The means to purchase tickets
For this endless quest;

In the sight of ripened fruits
Of arousal and ecstasy
That trick us, flesh to flesh.

*"In the crevice of ecstasy the planets swim,"
This came up when I clicked "create" on the "Poetry Generator" page.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-06-15 08:06 AM

I loved this....

Especially this, to me, this was the meat of
your prose

Praise be to the God that made
Visible by physical ways,
The means to purchase tickets
For this endless quest;

thanks Ford, for your ever happy middle eye

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-06-15 08:38 AM

Ah, smiling with you over this...and this, too, timely as it is with the news...

http://www.astrobio.net/news/modules.php?op=modload&name=News&f ile=article&sid=1603&mode=thread&order=0&thold=0

What say, Ford?

Take a spin?

You've certainly caught me up in this whirl!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2005-06-16 11:16 PM

Beautiful Ford.
Love this whole piece.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

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