Bedtime Stories (3) Dream's Still

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #35

Bedtime Stories (3) Dream's Still

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2005-06-14 10:42 AM

Bade this heart, "awaken not"
in this land of once forgot
where shadows roam, yes, rule a few
through hearts with doors like me & you

soft the hands in search of key
to open love & lock the grieve
share through silent eyes, reprieve
roads once blocked inside of me

hushed with racing pulse await
whispered oath honeyed to taste
inhibitions lost in storms
of climes once cold grown balmy, warm

yet, wishes seldom kiss these grounds
where dreams,desires most oft abound
held so precious 'neath skin & thought
to awaken now would be for nought

touch me here across our moon
touch me, morning cometh soon
sweet the plea of your love sought
here in this land of once forgot...

~tier

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-06-14 10:49 AM

I would not want to awaken from such a delicious dream, either!

tier, you write with such a gentle touch ~ but it carries much weight and import.

(blamy ~ typo? "balmy")

An exquisitely expressed dream of night!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-06-14 10:50 AM

Absolutely lovely writing Tier,
this is so soft and beautiful!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2005-06-14 10:51 AM

*Chuckling*

Thanks for the correction and the nice words, EA!

Thank you too, dear Gentle Spirit!

*hugs*

~tier

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

4 posted 2005-06-14 12:39 PM

oh tier....what a fairytale...

niiiice rush of thoughts~

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2005-06-14 01:23 PM

This one gives me visions. It is filled with new thoughts for me, to think I am the door to my heart-that is priceless. Thank you.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2005-06-14 01:34 PM

enjoyed the read
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2005-06-15 01:01 PM

Beautiful.

Eric

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-06-15 02:38 PM

Simply beautiful !!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.