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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2005-06-13 09:09 AM

Much more attuned to softer sounds, so harsh, appears the day.
In subtle tones is slumber found, desist, and go away.
Your strident calls offend these ears which much prefer to doze,
among the dulcet melodies sweet Morpheus composed.

Your daylight sounds a marching band, demanding to intrude,
upon my sleeping symphony, performed in solitude.
Arrest your clamor in mid-step, your pomp and circumstance
are deemed no less than crass and crude,
while I remain entranced.

By sounds that wash on windswept shores on waves that soothe the soul.
With no more thought of marching bands
or, daylights' taken toll,
than "Brahms' might give to " Sousa" should they ever chance to meet,
the one in glaring contrast to the other, sounding sweet.

So slide me into liquid, slip me back into the stream,
of sounds performed as prelude to an everlasting dream.

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (06-13-2005 12:13 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-06-13 09:27 AM

Dr.Moose1
Enjoyed this write very much, excellent.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-06-13 11:00 AM

DrMoose~

Don't know HOW you do what you do ...
but this totally captivates me~

'So slide me into liquid, slip me back into the stream,
of sounds performed as prelude to an everlasting dream.'

OH MY !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2005-06-13 11:03 AM

This is a fine compostion of rhythm and image. Very well done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

4 posted 2005-06-15 08:06 PM

Sy,
Thanks so much, as I've said before, coming from you, 'tis high praise indeed.
Doc

Dear Marge,
Once again, what can one say when the idolized share, but, thank you so much, you're always an inspiration.
Doc

KJ,
And again, my thanks. You are all busy people who take the time to reply, where as,
I am sorely lacking. I wave my fools' cap in salute, for it is I who miss the opportunity, and you who will benefit.
Doc

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