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comforting silence
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comforting silence |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
i wish you were here in a crisp room with a window opening into lights, buildings, cars far below like childrens toys on the floor a strange hotel with strange voices... strange words that seem like cheerful gibberish fading in and out past the sliding door exiting, new, and unexptected change it becomes like a fresh summer night on the porch at home. I don't sleep this night or the night before, I exist silently, more awake than if i had slept, thinking only of you, wishing only for you to share this moment, in comfortable half asleep conversation, How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
absolutely love the feel of this!  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Good write and "in comfortable half asleep conversationd" is the best kind of conversation one can have. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this has a lovely feel to it. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
this has that endless flow feeling ... easily to be swept away in it .... Thank you for the read. |
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