Open Poetry #35 |
The Finest In the Forest |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
He has the strength of an oak tree, Yet like the willow, he can weep. He is taller than a redwood, And his roots go just as deep. His scent is that of cedar, He is straight as pine of white. He is grand and he is golden, Like a maple in autumn light. He is stately as an elm tree, Shading me from summer sun. His whispers sough like pine boughs, In evening breeze as day is done. He shimmers like a poplar, As morning light plays on the grass. He’s the finest in the forest, And a great piece of ash. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-24-2005 08:29 AM).] |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
LOL...i ain't sure if he's your man or your woodpile but i sure enjoyed the humor. Live like it's your last day... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
bb ~ Well, I am pleased that you enjoyed the little haha at the end! I even surprised myself with the ending! Staying up late can do funny things to one's mind! lol Loves 'n laughs, EA P.S. What kind of tree are you? |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed the humor,thanks for the fun. marty |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well this is just brilliant EA, so well wriiten and rymed too...thank you...like your new pic.too.... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
And a great piece of ash....LOL! Funny Earth Angel!....cute poem! ~ARh We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This was humor at it's best..strong humor..very much enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
too cute |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
latearrival ~ I think my "halo" slipped with this one! Glad you enjoyed it! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rose of Pure Gold ~ Your golden reply deserves 2 "Thank You"s !!! Have a great day! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Well it wasn't me, I think I'm a pussy willow. LOL an angel with a sense of humor. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ARH ~ I'm pleased that you can appreciate my bit of off-colour humour! Staying up late does crazy things to an "angel's" mind! lol Warm hug & an impish grin, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee ~ A haha begets a haha! I know you have a sense of humour and I'm happy that you can appreciate mine! Love 'n Light 'n haha's! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
p s ~ A "cute" from a cutie, is cute! Have a funny, sunny day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Oh, shucks! I thought that you would realize that I was writing about you! ~ Oh, well, my mistake. In any regard, I still like pu... ~ oh, that wasn't going to sound right! Love ya, Mr. Pussy Willow, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO.... I loved the poem's twist to humor... and then your replies??? Icing on my smile's cake. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Belle ~ I love to make you laugh! It is music to my ear's! It's loud, bold, earthy ~ and highly infectious! Have a glorious day! Hugs with love, Linda |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Giggling out loud, Linda. I loved this and your sense of humor. I am a strong oak tree. hugs my friend, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
H, Marti! Yes, you are a mighty oak! You stand tall and strong ~ and majestic! I must admit that I am more of willow myself. I may weep like a willow at times ~ and I bend as well~ not from weakness, but because I am easy-going ~ and supple! So good to hear from you, Marti Oak! Hugs with love from Linda Willow, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James I loved your aloha haha! Linda |
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