Open Poetry #35 |
Nothing much |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Unicorns and waltzing witches the inkblot sky how am i to analyze? the ponies ride free cloud wisp, wisp of cloud follow to find the starting line hanging on, where'd it all go? 3 steps forward 2 steps back the box of crackerjacks lost its prize rush rush - hurry to catch up who paints the sky - is the it really I? flip flop tock tick tick the tock 30 seconds just sailed by the chimes at noon salute the flag the open casket bury the dead and the laundry still flies off steeplechase lines, the purple pronouns the polka dot sky the branches pray but empty trees lose illusions when dark worlds realign picking petals i shield my eyes suite sean blue eyes can't you come back just one more time? this is really just a tossed word salad, a beggar's bowl of this and that some jackson pollack lullaby, but glad you peeked, cause i'm feeling unplugged and just had to unwind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A tossed word salad? Ahh, but the dressing is divine. TD |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
oh yeah...this is candy canes in super glue...enjoyed it ms inky |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loved this...filled with gentle visuals Well done |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Interesting - I was thinking earlier of comparing myself to a fruit salad (hehe) - enjoyed this tumble of words M - s If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You belong up there with Kerouac, Michele. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for partaking in the silly salad |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ in a capricious mood, were you? ~ and delightfully so! Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
If you needed a little validation,we are here to do that. lovely words you typed out here. marty |
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