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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
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It starts like this - A silence waking to voice. The breath moving warm,slow across your lips to mine. And then a wait for holy words to fall. Leaning to the edge of silent boundaries...I listen. No...more than listen. I absorb. And once spoken...it ends like this. A voice slipping to a silence heard. Having prayed the words...I love you...to my ears. [This message has been edited by Ericc (06-09-2005 06:02 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*melt* oh and yeah... *sigh* you do have a way.... this is soooo lovely  |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Wow!!! ***sigh*** lovin it!! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Smooth, like the creamy delight of chocolate. Oh, so pleasurable! SG [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (06-11-2005 05:41 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A voice slipping to a silence heard. Having prayed the words... ~*~ Amen. *wink* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely write, Eric. Oh, and I need to add "as usual". |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect...as always..love it! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
don't wait... your opprotune moment stares you in the face. this reads like the slap in the face it tells about. i like that. you've also inspired me on to something of my own.. thank you. we are what we seek |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
doubly nice...Martin |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
such a sweet whisper... ~tier |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: There are poems that make me cry because of their melancholic content and then there are poems like yours which make me cry because of their UNIVERSAL BEAUTY, like this one. Praying ... I love you. Hear the sacred tune .. Margherita  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, yes... and that prayer changes everything... turns existing into living. *S* This is incredibly beautiful!! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eric I see that your golden pen still shines brightly. Beautiful! Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sigh....yes just like this....you have a masterful way of bringing love to the surface and letting it shine! I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sighs, just lovely! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You "absorb" and I "listen". Romantically sweet and gentle as ever.   Linda |
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