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Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2005-06-08 01:30 PM

Cumulative the words lost brevity
When they turned into the fine crease of skin
That age left along the corners of eyes
From squinting as we searched for paths between
The clouds that came

Spring to spring they do

Form along the boundary lines
Where cool meets the warm of you and finds
The uplift more than sufficient to bear the weight
Of brewing storms

Like the one inside your skin
When thoughts of a touch might scribe themselves
Just below your navel and spread
Into humid climes before they run
In a fade of ink to mark how it is when
Too much is not enough for they are after all
Only words

To be written one letter after another
Then delivered along with rain as the sky begins
It’s own shed of silk and stands again
Nude of stars with a curve
Heavy there milked in a mark of haze
To feed the infant day
                                   Yet born
I am lost to the spelling
Of words larger than love
      And can not understand the wiles of writing
Just a few words to say what it is
I carry in my own thunderous noise of mind
Which bring me here
To scan the naked sky
             And try to spell your name
In glyphs pressed into the wet wet clay from
Which we were formed
                                  So many stormy lifetimes
Long ago

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2005-06-08 01:36 PM

"Like the one inside your skin
When thoughts of a touch might scribe themselves
Just below your navel and spread
Into humid climes before they run
In a fade of ink to mark how it is when
Too much is not enough for they are after all
Only words"

This started as a warmth at the nape of my neck and like a lovers touch traveled down my spine sending shivers thoughout my body...

that is what these words said to me.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2005-06-08 01:37 PM

ah... then it was a nice feeling it leaves..which is good...

thanks for the look see ma'am... and for the nice words

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-06-08 01:40 PM

Spring to spring they do

Form along the boundary lines
Where cool meets the warm of you and finds
The uplift more than sufficient to bear the weight
Of brewing storms

Like the one inside your skin
When thoughts of a touch might scribe themselves

~*~

If this is too many words...
then no reason it comes home
so easily...

Thank you for this, but where are
:3, :4, :5 and :6?

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2005-06-08 01:43 PM

3,4,5,and 6 are squirreled away.. hardly worth the read... or not yet ready to be read... they are shy I think...
and there are enough of words on rain around on the boards to sate most any desire...to taste the way rain is...or can be...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-06-08 01:48 PM

"I am lost to the spelling
Of words larger than love
      And can not understand they wiles of writing
Just a few words to say what it is
I carry in my own thunderous noise of mind
Which bring me here
To scan the naked sky
             And try to spell your name
In glyphs pressed into the wet wet clay from
Which we were formed
                                  So many stormy lifetimes
Long ago"

Oooooh damn...yes!
Sooo beautiful..so..alive.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2005-06-08 01:50 PM

mmm.. thank you ma'am.. I'll take a damn anytime..lol

long as it doesn't burst and flood me out..

oh.. that is spelled differently isn't it... go figure..I'm always getting confused with words..lol

thanks Ms N...

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

7 posted 2005-06-08 05:08 PM

**insatiable rain-baby**

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...more please...

**baby

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2005-06-08 05:28 PM

LOL.....

looks like cake you are eating there.. not rain...

thanks for the look see Ms Mari... but as for more...I am not sure... it would seem the rain and I are giving way to the build of clouds on humid afternoons and sudden strong storms... we're all under a tornado watch right now, until 9 tonight, and the temp is a balmy 91 degree, but the humidity is only 73%....lol... sort of like a sauna out there.. and a breeding fround for clouds and storms... a totally different feel than the rain. well.. at least to me..

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2005-06-09 10:54 AM

found another!

keep writing!

~tier

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2005-06-09 11:04 AM

am lost to the spelling
Of words larger than love
      And can not understand the wiles of writing
Just a few words to say what it is
I carry in my own thunderous noise of mind
Which bring me here
To scan the naked sky
             And try to spell your name
In glyphs pressed into the wet wet clay from
Which we were formed
                                  So many stormy lifetimes
Long ago

Another scribe for the Library of Congress...

simply miraculous writing.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

11 posted 2005-06-09 12:07 PM

Cpat hair you have penned a masterpeice with each of these. Thank you so very much for sharing them with us

Wonderul work my poetic friend

Tima

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

12 posted 2005-06-09 12:16 PM

Passion and desire flirt among words that draw the eye to read and read again...this poem is profoundly beautiful...I love the reading of it and have done so several times now...I am printing it off so that I can read it again...*hugs*

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

13 posted 2005-06-10 06:48 AM

I want more too!

You are so talented Cpat....
Soft, gentle, too many words to describe your poetry....

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2005-06-10 08:26 AM

lol too much rain on the boards?

rain, clouds, sun....

you write it.

we will come.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2005-06-10 08:32 AM

how could I have almost missed this...

another beauty from your never ending well of talent....

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

16 posted 2005-06-22 11:31 PM

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

17 posted 2005-06-23 01:23 AM

I have spoken with one wise man about this very subject many times and have yet to come up with any sort of logical conclusion:

I am lost to the spelling
Of words larger than love
      And can not understand the wiles of writing
Just a few words to say what it is
I carry in my own thunderous noise of mind
Which bring me here
To scan the naked sky
             And try to spell your name
In glyphs pressed into the wet wet clay from
Which we were formed
                                  So many stormy lifetimes
Long ago

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